Monday, May 7, 2007

If You Call Me

Most lambs go through the fence,
but they turn back
because the ewe can't follow

the verge of the road is verdant.

Hedges to the horizon,
closing in with a blank sea mist.
Easter is a reminder --

of the fate of lost lambs.

You couldn't follow and I did not return
but I have learned now
to let the fences hold me.

if you call me I will come home.




[poetry train #3]

7 comments:

Robin L. Rotham said...

What a beautiful poem, Emily! I always worry when I see calves in the ditch, and I know their mothers are on the other side of the fence are mooing, "Get back here!" But they don't, of course, until they want milk or danger approaches.

Now I feel bad for enjoying leg of lamb at Easter...well, sort of. Not bad enough to give it up. ;-)

Rhian said...

"the verge of the road is verdant" i love this - the boundaries of unexplored experience; the edge of independence. I suppose i'm one of those that barreled over the fence and never looked back.
i so love poems ladened with onion skins.

Rashenbo said...

That is a lovely poem. I agree with Rhian, I like the verdant line best I think. It evokes a strong response. :)

Carol said...

Poor little lost lambs. Beautifully done. Carol

Susan Helene Gottfried said...

Learning to let fences hold me... now that's a skill I could use.

Nicely done!

STAK said...

mission accomplished.......it's gorgeous.........

Anonymous said...

Easter is a reminder of the fate of lost lambs.

Easter as redemption - where the sacrificial lamb ends up on someone's dinner plate.

Nice juxtaposition.

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